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Thursday, July 4, 2019

Liams Mungo story

This is my story about Mrs Thoms dog Mungo. Tell me what you think of it.


7 comments:

  1. Hi Liam my name is Jackson i quite enjoy your post what i like about is got so munch deitl about this also . Next time you could mabey put lables on the pictuers and I had a quston what are the hilghts for ?
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    JACKSON

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  2. hi Liam i like How you uesd heaps of detail
    form Dylan

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  4. Hi my name is Alex. I really like your story about the dogs. It was very interesting and you wrote a very long story. Did this take you a long time to write? I look forward to reading your next one.

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  5. Hello Liam my name is Travis. I like dogs and your story. I have a dog at home her name is Lola. You should make more dog story's. My dog cost 200$.

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  6. Hi Liam my name is Dylan hb what made you write a story

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